Sunday Six: Breath(e) One

My newest novel has just been published! To celebrate, this month’s Six Sunday Sentences will be from Breath(e)


On Friday afternoon they stood outside the subway entrance with backpacks on enjoying the spring sun. Elizabeth faced Ethan and whispered, “Is it bad that I wish I could have you right here in the street?”

“Not bad at all,” Ethan said. He smiled and kissed her. She grabbed the sides of his face and pushed her lips harder against his. The sun was hot on the back of her neck.


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  1. jayel kaye
    Jan 1, 2012

    nicely written.

  2. Cara Bristol
    Jan 1, 2012

    Interesting six…I feel a sense of tension, as if something is about to happen, to change for the characters. Enjoyed it.

  3. Jessica Subject
    Jan 1, 2012

    Hot and hot!

    Congrats on your release and all the best in 2012! :)

  4. Alyssa
    Jan 1, 2012

    Hot six!

  5. Alix
    Jan 1, 2012

    Great scene you have painted here. Well done!

  6. Karysa Faire
    Jan 1, 2012

    Great imagery here. And brings up some wonderful memories of my own. ;-) Thanks!

  7. Nellie
    Jan 1, 2012

    Congrats on your release. Nice six.

  8. Lex Valentine
    Jan 2, 2012

    Very sexy! It’s awesome that she’s bold enough to articulate that to him.

  9. Kelly Said
    Jan 2, 2012

    The sun being hot on the back of her neck probably paled in comparison to the heat of that kiss ;) nice six! :)

  10. Gemma Parkes
    Jan 2, 2012

    Maybe there is a cool alley way they could slip in to? loved it!

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